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10月11日 Just something silly. I decided to leave a poem for The Boyfriend to find when he gets back from where ever he is at the moment (some house party or other, though it's possible he's hit his local club instead cause the party seemed dire from the way he described it). I really really really wanted to do something short, sweet and daft, as I did on his postcard: Blueberries are blue, Redcucrrents are red, I don't get to see you: So I'm writing, instead! Easy peasy. However I couldn't think of any rhyme scheme, poem form or anything, so I decided to aim for serious, and to see what happens Anyway, I ended up unable to really maintain it, so I resulted in a half-serious, half-hearted-half comedy poem. Amidst the low hum, and soft light, I sit in my computer chair, this night. I try to think of the things I want to say. how I feel, how I think, what I'd pray; (If I were religious, or spiritual in any way) I miss you with all my might, During the warmer days, The colder night, I wish I could see you always. Life is short, I know it so, and we have far of it left to go, before we can live, the way we please in your arms, in my arms, not on our knees. I wrote this poem, in an attempt to touch however I think I tried to rhyme, too much. It's a shame I can't see his face when he reads it. I'd like to know his immediate reaction, really. I've posted it on the forum I frequent, and two people seem to like it, for different reasons, so I'll just assume he either smiles, wells up, or puts on his 'what in the flying hell?" face. You are all such a wonderful audience. I may have to dedicate an awful poem to you sometime! 引用通告引用此项的网络日志
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